[Ngoại ngữ] Diary.

[Nguyễn Minh Thư]

Dancing with him make me feel ashame, really ashame. I hope I will be better. Not just his obstacle but his truly partner. I ll practice and practice more to be the best dancer, and he won 't feel dissapointed in me...

 

[sakura_1412]

Today, a day like other days. I wake up 6:30AM, brushing teeth, washing face and set the movement fitness.
Start up my computer and checking email, viewing messages on Facebook and listenning a my favourite song.
This morning, i'll be at home to record a song and affternoon i'll report my school's projects with my teacher.
And then, i'll go eat dinner with my friend.

P/s: i learning Endlish so chicken, thanks to all who helped me.

Tớ cũng gà lắm nhưng theo tớ thì nên sửa một vài chỗ như thế này:
1. Brushing và washing nên để nguyên mẫu. Nếu diễn tả các hành động nối tiếp nhau thì ngta sẽ dùng V,V and V, với lại lúc đầu bạn đang viết là wake up.
2. Mình nghĩ là "starting" câu này không có S ở đầu câu.
3. "to record" mình thấy câu này hơi kì kì, theo mình thì nên ghi là "so that i can record"
4."go eat dinner"-> have dinner
Nếu có gì sai sót thì bạn sửa lại giùm nhe^^

 

[bluesea88]

Sak cũng không biết là có dùng mạo từ trước "exciting chatting" không, nhưng nếu có thì dùng an vì e là vowel. Còn spend thì đi với V-ing chứ không phải là to-V, hùi đó tới giờ Sak học như vậy. Blue xem lại cho chắc nhé!!!:nghihoac:

Thật là ngại quá, Spend + Ving. Hichic. Phải học lại ngữ pháp thôi.

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Today, a day like(1) other days. I wake up (2) 6:30AM, brushing teeth, washing face and set the movement fitness.
Start up my computer and checking email, viewing messages on Facebook and listenning a my favourite song.
This morning, i'll be at home to record a song and affternoon i'll report my school's projects with my teacher.
And then, i'll go eat dinner with my friend.

P/s: i learning Endlish so chicken, thanks to all who helped me.

(1) like -> Likes: a day số ít.
(2) wake up at 6:30AM
(3) Report .... with -> report ...to
(4) Thanks to -> thanks for (sth/ doing sth).

i'll be at home to record a song

Câu này Blue thấy ok. Ngoài ra đồng ý với các ý kiến của Sakura.

 

[trangdang]

Today, so happy I am when I find out my interest in learning English: reading a book in English, learning some idioms and their usage. I learned it with fun. the feelings I lost for a long time. Until the afternoon, I can't make it clearly why I am so sad. There is something I'm trying to do but it is really out of my control. What a pity! the responsibility of a tutor really puts pressure on me. Anyway, never give up!

 

[hoaihuong_8x]

End of the day! All my problems is very smoothly. I feel happy, to sleep and ready for a better tomorrow.

 

[SinhBe]

So long I didn't write anything. This evening, I met my speaking group after 3 weeks delay. We had over 1hour to speak English, wetalked and laughed too much. This time is really effective. After that, we ate special food that Miss Tran brought from her province. It's delicious.
This morning, I didn't joined Offline with TTYT group, it's a pity! But I had a exciting chatting with Hoai Niem. He is so good. I hope him keep his enthusiasm.
I'm feel very happy when my idea about habit was responded. Thank you so much, member of KNSO.
Next week, I will start my job, my life in plans.
And now, I'm going to sleep.

Dear Bluesea,
In my opinion, I saw some of Ur mistakes and I've checked.
Hope U will recognize them.
Thks.

I haven't written anything for a long time.
This evening I met my speaking group after being delayed for 3 weeks.
We spent over 1 hour speaking EL, talking and laughing a lots. ( Đúng như Sakura nói vậy, Spend time/money doing Sth hoặc nếu dùng to V_Inf thì phải là It takes time/money to do Sth)
That time was really effective.
Then, We ate some special food, that was brought by Ms.Tran from her province. ( Ở đây để bị động sẽ dễ nghe hơn ^^)
They were extremelly delicious.
I didn't join...
It was a pity.
I had an exciting chatting with Hoai Niem...
I hope he will keep his enthusiam
I felt.
Thanks so much, members of KNSO forum.
I'll start my job, my life on plans.



---------- Post added at 01:11 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:49 PM ----------

Today, a day like other days. I wake up 6:30AM, brushing teeth, washing face and set the movement fitness.
Start up my computer and checking email, viewing messages on Facebook and listenning a my favourite song.
This morning, i'll be at home to record a song and affternoon i'll report my school's projects with my teacher.
And then, i'll go eat dinner with my friend.

P/s: i learning Endlish so chicken, thanks to all who helped me.

Okie.
Vào bài là đã thấy 1 lỗi rất rõ ràng rồi nè.
Today, a day like other days
Thiếu động từ To be. ( 1lỗi đơn giản thế này mà Bluesea sửa lại là day số ít phải thêm "s"sau "like" nữa chứ) Hizz, bó tay.
Sửa lại là: Today is like other days.
set the movement fitness.
Ở đây bạn có nghĩa là tập thể dục phải ko? Nếu thế thì bạn nên dùng cụm này sẽ hay hơn.
do exercise morning.
Mình thích cái câu cuối cùng này của bạn . Lol.
i learning Endlish so chicken.
Nhưng người nước ngoài sẽ ko dùng trạng từ gà như VN mình đâu. Haha.
Họ sẽ dùng "I'm not good at EngLish"
Rất đơn giản và khi dịch sang tiếng Việt, tùy theo cách nói chuyện của mỗi ng sẽ đc dịch ra nhiều kiểu và 1 trong số chúng sẽ có cái trạng thái " Chicken" của bạn đó. Lol
Còn những lỗi kia thì Bluesea và Sakura đã chỉ hết rồi.
Thks for Ur writting.
You'd better try to write more to improve Ur Knowledge of EL.

 

[bluesea88]

Today, I and my thesis group met our teacher for graduate thesis. This thesis is the last challenge for us and it also the biggest challenge. Tomorrow, we will start studying the thesis. We all know we must work hard and hard for this time.
Maybe, i don't have time for KNSO, for English and Japanese. But I will try to balance all. Especially, I hope 5Gs group will give me more energy to do all.

 

[cedrci_jake]

Today, I hear a song from a friend! He's sick so he can't sing. His band have 3 members but have only 2 person who sing. I feel unhappily But, finally, he sang a song which is my favorite song! I...I feel...I cried...
The best day

 

[vermouth]

Sometimes, I have been found the answer for my question: What is my passion? A passion which I can be living as well as dying for . A thing that is quite great so that I can surrender my soul for it. I haven’t got it , exactly I haven’t got it now. This is really a bad thing, but it’s true.

I don’t know what it is, but I know it is not money, love, relationships and something is similar. A thing makes me like crazy because of love for it, and I have got enough ability to realize my dream, of course.

But…My passion, who and where are U? I am finding U, and I don’t know when I see U, but I'm sure that I have never given up…

 

[fr]

the life give me too much things! my small hands aren't getting all, so i should share because i can receive more! :mimcuoi:

 

[bluesea88]

I work all day in university. I fell tired. Sometimes, I'm exhausted. But I always receive energy form my friends and my family.

 

[bluesea88]

It is too quiet. Hope somethings or someone changes it to active.

Writing skill is worse day by day.

 

[hoahong39]

i'm tired..im sad..i miss ....

 

[benny]

Gradually realize who is good for me...

 

[Mrs.Helen]

I've done my best. i'm tired and i miss....|>> zzz.

 

[bluesea88]

Today, I started a new plan for English. I have been failed many times.
This time, I have more motivation, energy and experiences. I have to success because I have another plan next year.
For over one month, I didn't try to do anything and i felt bad.

I have to remember that I just have one life to live.